Winter Sleds How Do You Like My Poem On Winter?
How do you like my poem on winter? - winter sleds
The bright, white snow easily satisfied,
It was found on the tops of trees.
And the country is more than one child,
Whose thoughts are not on a mild winter.
But on the sled in the shed,
With the hills and down, which could be accelerated.
And the snow that gleams in the sun
He said that the winter has only just begun.
My mother and my father told me that is good, but what do you want to think honestly, and please no rude comments.
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3 comments:
All the posters above Added:
The third verse is pluralization of verse 2
More precisely, it begins with "many children", then go to "he" in only one child in the next stanza.
In addition, the end is a bit "meh". The kind of poetry disappears without a "Communication on the impact." You can add another verse or two and finished strong.
All the posters above Added:
The third verse is pluralization of verse 2
More precisely, it begins with "many children", then go to "he" in only one child in the next stanza.
In addition, the end is a bit "meh". The kind of poetry disappears without a "Communication on the impact." You can add another verse or two and finished strong.
All the posters above Added:
The third verse is pluralization of verse 2
More precisely, it begins with "many children", then go to "he" in only one child in the next stanza.
In addition, the end is a bit "meh". The kind of poetry disappears without a "Communication on the impact." You can add another verse or two and finished strong.
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